This afternoon we looked at ways to improve our stories. I have tried to improve mine. You can see the first part on the board above. I have tried to use better words, and I have checked my full stops and other punctuation carefully. The sentences sound right when I read it out. I will finish the story later. Finish improving your stories at home. We will read out some of our stories tomorrow if they are good enough. Enjoy doing your homework.
Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Literacy: improving our stories
This afternoon we looked at ways to improve our stories. I have tried to improve mine. You can see the first part on the board above. I have tried to use better words, and I have checked my full stops and other punctuation carefully. The sentences sound right when I read it out. I will finish the story later. Finish improving your stories at home. We will read out some of our stories tomorrow if they are good enough. Enjoy doing your homework.
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