Literacy: shared writing of a letter

In our last revision lesson before tomorrow's writing exam we did a piece of shared writing. We imagined that we had been in a car crash. We wrote a letter to an imaginary friend, telling them what it was like. The letter is on the two boards above. I wrote too much to fit onto a single board. In the exam you will be expected to write a lot. I have put pointers to show you some good things about the letter that would get marks in the exam.